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Hate to break it to you but the your movie is about as good as anything produced by the Kitty Krew. Hell, the KK at least have an amount of random fagottry humour to it which can be rather amusing at times. This has nothing to it at all = \
In terms of graphics it wasn't that bad I suppose, but it's a shitty support ad for a shitty cause. Put your time t better use mate nad you'll make something a hell of a lot better than this I'm sure.
Author's Response:
Why bother? Because we want to stop all the spamming of the portal done by the kitty krew, I think that's a good cause.
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There really is no difference between this one and the one you submitted earlier. Yeah the buttons are different, but that really isn't enough to warrant an entire new version.
If you'd put in some different music and videos then maybe, but as it stands, this version really isn't needed in my opinion.
But yeah, whislt this is an original idea, the complete lack of anything in it makes it kind of bad. If you'd included more songs or something then it would have been a hell of a lot better.
You do however get props for having Drop the bombshell as one of the songs.
Author's Response:
It is different coz the other one didnt work...i was just making this one work...plus im working on new versions
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Graphically, this was fairly decent. I'm not a huge fan of the anime style, but you drew it reasonably well, and it obviously fits it with the setting of the movie.
If you wanted to improve this however, I'd set a bit more into story instead of just a fight scene. The concept of the Ritomikku Kage intrigued me, but in the movie all you really did was show someone becoming one and a fight. Personally, I'd like to know more about them. So I'd recomend in the next one of these you do, or if you remake this one, explaining a bit more about the Ritomikku Kage.
One final thing I'd like to adress is that the text at the beginning. For me it's fine to read. But for others I can easily it being a problem. Maybe you could make it more interesting by having someone narrate what's being said with backgroudnt hat's relevant to what's being said.
E.g. For the bit about people being arressted show a scene of the police arressting people.
2/5
Author's Response:
kool thnx i'll try adding more story and explaining every thing on the next one :D
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Not bad I suppose, though it was a little pointless.
You seem to be able to draw reasonably well if the hands that were in the movie were anything to go by, so next time, I'd recomend doing something a little more advanced than some random stick figures killing each other.
Also, try and do something with a bit more of a story to it.
Author's Response:
ill think of it,
but it's a serie i have in mind, so thats why it stay sticks
but mayby i'll make a real flash, without sticks and with good figures
thx for the rev
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That's not bad actually. I found it fairly amusing and the graphics weren't that bad. Next time you need more of story line to it though.
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Yeah I wanna get better first, I have only been in flash 2 months. So I wanna do random stuff first before I get into a plot.
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Nice one mate. I loved the Ryu bit. Only thing I can suggest is make it longer and maybe show sonya beating them up? either way good job and keep up the good work ;-)
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Show Sonya beating them up? No way dude, the humour is in the fact that you can't see it. Too many people don't know how to not show violence these days. ;)
I would've liked to make it longer, but I figured it'd be a great quick laugh.
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that samurai song is so damn catchy. and this looks really cool im drooling in anticipation for your the full thing.
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XDDD thanks, and thanks for reviewing, i had to tell sumthin to the previous guy who reviewed it, man i dont find anything wrong with mine and lightshadow, dood, mine are chibi and theirs are 3d rendered O.ó, whats exactly the prob that i would ahv?
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ha ha :P Nice joke compadre:P Well thought out :P
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<3
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thats brilliant! lol. The randomess of it is brilliant.
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Thank you! We try very hard. =)
<3
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