Score: 3

"Greater detail needed."

submission: Streaked- Black and Blue

date: September 16, 2007

For a first attempt at a movie, this wasn't bad I suppose. A lot of tweening with simple graphics and nothing really resembling a plot at all mans that it isn't really that good a movie as a whole though.

Try and make the grpaics mrpe detailed and make a plot for your next movie so it's more than just random figures fighting.

Score: 0

"Why bother?"

submission: Anti-Kitty Krew

date: September 16, 2007

Hate to break it to you but the your movie is about as good as anything produced by the Kitty Krew. Hell, the KK at least have an amount of random fagottry humour to it which can be rather amusing at times. This has nothing to it at all = \

In terms of graphics it wasn't that bad I suppose, but it's a shitty support ad for a shitty cause. Put your time t better use mate nad you'll make something a hell of a lot better than this I'm sure.

Score: 8

"Great game"

submission: Accumulate

date: January 16, 2007

A nice simple, effective and somewhat addicting little game. Graphically, it isn't brilliant, but that isn't a problem as it works well enough to compensate for that.

I found the sounds a little bit annoying at times, so I had to turn them off, but yeah, a good game over all :-)

Nice one mate

Score: 6

"Decent attempt"

submission: Minesweeper Variants

date: November 22, 2006

This is adecent attempt to remake a classic game, but overall, the actual shape of the board you're using make no difference, it doesn't add anything to the game by changing the shape of the pieces.

Making a variant on minesweeper is a decent idea, but I'd recomend trying something else.

Despite this so, you made a decent minesweeper game so you get credit for that.

Only thing I can think of to vastly improve what you've got so far is to make it so that a right click marks where the bomb is.

Score: 1

"There's really no difference"

submission: Pi - pod v. 2

date: October 28, 2006

There really is no difference between this one and the one you submitted earlier. Yeah the buttons are different, but that really isn't enough to warrant an entire new version.

If you'd put in some different music and videos then maybe, but as it stands, this version really isn't needed in my opinion.

But yeah, whislt this is an original idea, the complete lack of anything in it makes it kind of bad. If you'd included more songs or something then it would have been a hell of a lot better.

You do however get props for having Drop the bombshell as one of the songs.

Score: 4

"Decent start"

submission: Ritomikku Kage

date: October 28, 2006

Graphically, this was fairly decent. I'm not a huge fan of the anime style, but you drew it reasonably well, and it obviously fits it with the setting of the movie.

If you wanted to improve this however, I'd set a bit more into story instead of just a fight scene. The concept of the Ritomikku Kage intrigued me, but in the movie all you really did was show someone becoming one and a fight. Personally, I'd like to know more about them. So I'd recomend in the next one of these you do, or if you remake this one, explaining a bit more about the Ritomikku Kage.

One final thing I'd like to adress is that the text at the beginning. For me it's fine to read. But for others I can easily it being a problem. Maybe you could make it more interesting by having someone narrate what's being said with backgroudnt hat's relevant to what's being said.

E.g. For the bit about people being arressted show a scene of the police arressting people.

2/5

Score: 7

"Not bad"

submission: ghostbasher

date: October 28, 2006

This wasn't a bad game, but there were a few problems I noticed.

1) There wasn't any form of alert that told you when you're out of ammo.

Granted there was the flashing thing next to the icon but it wasn't very noticeable. Maybe a little "reload" sound effect or something would fix that problem

2) There were large periods of time where nothing was happeningas the zombie wasn't around.

Just make the zombie appear more often and that problem is solved.

Overall I liked the game, especially the background. You did a good job on that.

3/5

keep up the good work.

Score: 6

"Good graphics"

submission: Emoteeglobes - Snow Fun

date: October 14, 2006

I really liked the way you'd drawn everything in it and it as quite chuckle worthy at times. I enjoyed it, good work.

Score: 4

"Little pointless"

submission: Pencils episode 2

date: October 14, 2006

Not bad I suppose, though it was a little pointless.

You seem to be able to draw reasonably well if the hands that were in the movie were anything to go by, so next time, I'd recomend doing something a little more advanced than some random stick figures killing each other.

Also, try and do something with a bit more of a story to it.

Score: 8

"Not bad..."

submission: 8 clock!?

date: October 3, 2006

That's not bad actually. I found it fairly amusing and the graphics weren't that bad. Next time you need more of story line to it though.